'A Place to Play' published September 2011 by Pegasus Elliot Mackenzie Publishers

Saturday, December 10, 2011

Moving on to WFN2

WFN2 (World Famous Novel 2), aka 'An Immigrant's Tale' has had feedback from five guinea pig readers and the verdict from them is very positive. However their advice is that there is still work to be done before I can start approaching publishers with the sample chapters. "Too descriptive", "not descriptive enough", "clever twists and turns in the plot", "couldn't work out how Dusty was linked to William" - therefore how do I go about using the differing suggestions without losing sight of the story I wanted to tell?

Book Reading in Nakusp, Dec 10th 2011
The answer is in the story itself and it is found in the characters I have created. I realised this today when I was presenting my novel 'A Place to Play' at the local library. My colleague who introduced me quoted me from my BCPVPA article when I had said that I worked with my charaters Martha, Rudi and Trojan to get that story told.  The three teenagers are very much part of my life these days and I sometimes wonder what their opinions are about things I do and see. For example, at school with the teachers on strike action and not doing supervision at recess (break time) it could have been easy to cancel recess (and hence play time) but I didn't. I'm out there every recess making sure that the children have time to play in. I know that Martha, Rudi and Trojan would be pleased with me and I sometimes feel they are out there too.  I think they would rank me up there with their own Dr Grey.

So it is then, that as I do a final edit and polishing to 'An Immigrant's Tale' this Christmas holiday I am going to have to involve my characters. William will have to tell me what Halifax sounded like in 1917, Catherine is going to have to let me know what her name would be if she chose it herself (we all do that from time to time, don't we?: "If I could have chosen my own name I would have chosen...") and Vanessa will have to describe to me how she can walk down an Ottawa street with a ghost arm-in-arm and not look an odd-ball to people around her.

Even though I am moving on now in my focus from 'A Place to Play' to 'An Immigrant's Tale' Martha, Rudi and Trojan are still with me. Indeed, they will be here to help me craft an even better tale as we all have experience now working on a novel. We are no longer unpublished, we have learnt the ropes. 'An Immigrant's Tale' will be a better written novel; I never professed that 'APTP' was a piece of literature only that the story was a good one. I do hope, however, that my second novel does show that I am growing as a writer. A clever signature piece would be to offer Martha, Rudi and Trojan cameo roles in William and Vanessa's tale. I wonder if they will accept?

Why I write.

This is an article I wrote for the BC Principal and Vice Principal's Association magazine for the December 2011 edition. Blog followers will have find similarities with previous blogs as I used them to create this article which is a compilation of my thoughts and musings over the last few months.


They say that there is a novel inside each and every one of us and 'they' are quite right. Any novel is a tale in some form or other of the human experience and what better place than to start with our own life. Think of the great characters that you have come across in your time, think of those who did not appear to be so great but now ponder on what were they thinking inside or hiding from you as your paths crossed? What if you chose not to get off the bus at the stop you intended to get off but chose to wait just one more stop? What if you didn't get to work on time for your first job? What if you chose to attend SFU and not UBC? See, it's not so difficult to come up with a story based around any of these scenarios is it?

But why a novel? Over the last twelve years when I started on a MBA in Educational Management, I have pushed myself to achieve academic goals to better myself in my own learning in the field of education. One of the lasting legacies for me from these years of writing, for example, a thesis or an exam on Canadian Literature has been that I enjoy writing. Being able to take the time to achieve a creative goal for myself was a new and incredibly rewarding experience. One December day at the end of 2008 during a wet Port Hardy Christmas, having finished reading yet another novel the night before, I literally woke up feeling that the time was right to write the novel that had been nudging me from inside telling me that it was jolly well about time it was written. Three characters appeared out of the blue that day - Rudi, his sister Trojan and their plump friend Martha - and started telling me how the story of 'The Last Field in England' would be told. I hadn't worked it out beforehand; I needed them to help me tell the tale. We worked together, the four of us, on the story and told anyone who cared to be reminded that a playing field is a precious space for children to be able to access in order for them to have their right to play. Of course there's a reasonable quota of baddies (mainly adults) in the story and a couple of twists and turns but be rest assured that the three friends use their wit to overcome the odds stacked against them.

The novel morphed into 'A Place to Play'. It took me six months of rejections from Canadian publishers ‘It’s not Canadian enough,’ and from UK publishers, ‘We like your style but don’t think the story is for us,’ for me to put the manuscript to one side and let it collect a thin layer of dust. Embarking upon a new adventure into the West Kootenays and SD10, followed by a snow- bound Christmas holiday I blew off the dust and did a revamp of the novel in sections. This task coincided with hearing about a small UK publisher who was being interviewed on CBC Radio 1 who said they would welcome manuscripts from first-time writers. Working with the publishers has been a learning experience through which I have become a little more adept at proof reading, have had to relearn some English word usage as Canadian vocabulary has managed to creep in after five years in BC and have had to start to use the digital world to help me market myself as a writer – I reluctantly created a Facebook profile and a blog (which I prefer) with a specific aim to be ‘found’ through internet searches as the author of ‘A Place to Play.’ One perk of Facebook, I discovered, is being able to see the Facebook page from my publishers and knowing what the pundits are saying about my novel.
The novel inside me grew out of my experience as a child in suburban London in the 1970s and 1980s. I remember playing outside from dawn until dusk in parks and fields (yes, they do exist in suburbia today…just). I believe that my generation is the last generation that was able play outside without the fear of strangers, without the trappings of the internet and social networking. What I have seen in recent years in BC is that the use of social networking by teenagers is taking away their time in face to face communications with friends. I recall, recently, when a teenager who we took to the local hot springs as an end of year treat, who had all his friends with him (New Denver is a small place) still went on to Facebook to talk to them.

UNICEF's Convention on the Rights of the Child Article 31 states that a child has the right to relax, to play and to take part in a wide range of recreational activities. Too many children I have worked with in recent years are carers for their younger siblings, need to take part time work in order for their family to survive or are over or under weight due to neglect. Their right to be a child, to have a childhood needs to be protected even in developed nations like Canada and the UK. I hope that my novel adds to the growing concern that children are not playing, that they are growing up too fast and that they don’t know how to deal with human face-to-face interactions.

As for the success of my novel, time will tell of course, but the tale has been told, the characters have found peace as their mission was accomplished and I have achieved an ambition set around 1977 or so when my brother and I wrote a picture book together on ghosts complete with pictures. The ghosts were orange.

Natasha Miles is Principal of Lucerne Elementary Secondary School, New Denver, SD10. She became a permanent resident in Canada in 2006 having taught in the UK and Europe. Her first novel ‘A Place to Play’ is published by Pegasus Elliott MacKenzie Publishers and is available from www.pegasuspublishers.com